Visual design · Draft concept
Kael Ashari
A strength that shelters
Draft conceptA proposed Alizean warrior whose formidable appearance conceals a patient, protective nature.
“A shield is measured by who stands behind it.”Proposed character voice
- The Alizean live on the permanently sunlit side of Almag.
- They have dark, melanin-rich skin, tall muscular bodies, claws and tusks.
- They are the heroic civilization, fighting to reclaim their planet.
Inside the character.
Appearance & clothing
A towering warrior with small lower tusks, clawed hands and tightly braided hair. Bronze lamellar armour sits over clay-red and ivory cloth.
Personality
Patient, observant and gentle with those who fear her. She considers restraint a skill that must be practised.
Motivation
To return displaced families to their homes without teaching the next generation to live only for war.
Abilities & equipment
Exceptional strength, disciplined spear fighting and a broad defensive shield. No supernatural ability has been assigned to this concept.
Limits & weaknesses
She has little experience of artificial darkness or off-world technology. Her instinct to protect everyone can make withdrawal difficult.
Role in the story
A ground-level view of the Alizean struggle and a possible envoy to Earth, where her appearance challenges human assumptions about heroism.
Room to grow.
From defending a familiar home to extending her sense of belonging to an unfamiliar world. Her name, history and role are all open for review.
